Great P.I sara I think it was really cool how you did the P.I mainly useing video.the movie was a bit hard for us to see. you could of done more than 1 film Ty Thom Luke
Great Pi Sara. You spoke loud and clear. You also had an interesting topic. Maybe next time you could bring a torch with you so we could see. Hannah Jam Natalya Alana
What a very cool topic. Your movie showed the huge amount of fun you had with your brothers and cousin. You spoke with enthusiasm and clarity - as did the rest of your family. To improve the quality of your movie you could direct your camera person to hold the camera very still. Editing your movie and maybe putting background music would also improve your movie. Well done for trying a new format. Overall though, this was an enjoyable PI. Well done, Sara. TC
cool hut sara maybe next you could make it longer and show steps of building the hut. but it's cool that its by the river.
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Nice PI I liked your topic it was interresting, you were clear at speaking. Next time do better filming.
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nice P.I.
ReplyDeletei liked how you made a video to present it.
you could of made the videoing more seeable
from camryn and jason
Nice P.i Sara
ReplyDeleteI liked how you used other people in yuor P.I
Next time you could try keep the camera stedy.
ferg sam
Great P.I sara I think it was really cool how you did the P.I mainly useing video.the movie was a bit hard for us to see. you could of done more than 1 film
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Great Pi Sara.
ReplyDeleteYou spoke loud and clear. You also had an interesting topic. Maybe next time you could bring a torch with you so we could see.
Hannah Jam Natalya Alana
Great PI next time more slides and better lighting you did well in putting the actors in one of the slide
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By Cindy,Rebecc & Linda
Cool P.I Sara
ReplyDeleteWe liked your video clip it was really cool but next time you could do a bit more investagation
-Cat and Annaleise
good pi you spoke clear in the vidieo but you needed more light in vidieo
ReplyDeleteWhat a very cool topic. Your movie showed the huge amount of fun you had with your brothers and cousin. You spoke with enthusiasm and clarity - as did the rest of your family. To improve the quality of your movie you could direct your camera person to hold the camera very still. Editing your movie and maybe putting background music would also improve your movie. Well done for trying a new format. Overall though, this was an enjoyable PI. Well done, Sara.
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