great job Sara you put a lot of work into it that i could see. It was colorful but next time speak a little slower and clearer and don't read the the words that are on the power point but apart from that great pi Kate,Libby and Sophie
Great PI Sara the box looked outstanding colourful and bright and you must have looken a long time to get right next time talk louder and take your time when you talk but apart from that good job.
Well done Sara that was a very interesting pi!!! :). Emma-what you did well-you added lots of effort. what you could do better next time- maybe speak a bit slower.
Great Pi Sara! It was a really cool idea! You could have worked on speaking a bit louder and had a little bit more info but other than that A MERRY job!
That was a good PI Sara we liked it how you took pictures of the box and put them onto the power point maybe next time you could speak a bit more clearly and sand up.You did really well.well done sara:)
well done sara your diorama looks cool you need to work on you speaking
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great job Sara you put a lot of work into it that i could see. It was colorful but next time speak a little slower and clearer and don't read the the words that are on the power point but apart from that great pi
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Great PI Sara the box looked outstanding colourful and bright and you must have looken a long time to get right next time talk louder and take your time when you talk but apart from that good job.
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Good PI Sara it was very interesting.
ReplyDeleteYou spoke loud and clear, and the diorama is really cool!!
Next time: Speak slower.
Britt, Corbin , and EGG =P
Well done Sara that was a very interesting pi!!! :).
ReplyDeleteEmma-what you did well-you added lots of effort.
what you could do better next time- maybe speak a bit slower.
what you did well you bringed it in and spoke very clearly well done :)
ReplyDeletenext step maybe a bit more info & more inaraction with the auduiance
cool P.I Sara I have never herd of a diorama and you have put a lot of work into it next time try to make it bigger.
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ReplyDeleteIt was a really cool idea!
You could have worked on speaking a bit louder and had a little bit more info but other than that A MERRY job!
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Interesting pi sara! Not very much info there sara, The diarama looks very 3D!!!
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great pi, it was really short but it looked pretty 3D
ReplyDeleteThat was a good PI Sara we liked it how you took pictures of the box and put them onto the power point maybe next time you could speak a bit more clearly and sand up.You did really well.well done sara:)
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Well done Sara! That was an awesome diorama. You should give it to someone at christmas. I might make one of those now.
ReplyDeletewow Sara! You created a successful diorama. That looks hard to do.next time you need to speak slower but it was good that was a cool pi Caleb Alan Ken
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