jelly muffin
Wednesday, April 13, 2011
my writting
ROCKY SHORE
Sophie and I picked up big rocks and found lots of crabs. We heaved a gigantic rock up. There were about 50 creepy crawly crunchy crabs and 20 bright bulging beautiful anemones. The crabs slithered through rocks when w hauled up the gigantic rock then T.C said "camp teams"Oh w have to go back to the teeny tiny dorms now.
S.A I think I described it well.
next time i will make it in the present tense.
I learn't how to do paragraph.
independence level
My independence level is three and i am happy about that but by the end of the year i want to be a level four.
Tuesday, April 5, 2011
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