vis lang

i lernt how to draw a hippo
i did the hippos good
to not do a much white

Quiddage

Yay today Sophie and I are doing Quiddage. We are the fizzders and we sell sherbet.I loveQuiddage because everyone is involved and it is sooooooooooo awesome. I like the la soupers the beast after ours but at the la soupers sell soup and bread but I don't like soup so I just have the bread but it is really nnice!!!!some kids didn't even open a businesses.

Quiddage

Yay today Sophie and I are doing Quiddage. We are the fizzders and we sell sherbet.I loveQuiddage because everyone is involved and it is sooooooooooo awesome. I like the la soupers the beast after ours but at the la soupers sell soup and bread but I don't like soup so I just have the bread but it is really nnice!!!!some kids didn't even open a businesses.

Athletics

At was a hot burning day and we had athletics, yay!!!

First we had high jump I got a 2 oh I wish I got a 3.

Then we had my favourite, sprints yay! It was my first race I was so nervous . Fiona said "ready set,"and banged the clappers we were off. I was in the led Sophie and Amy were close behind. I was running myhardest , yay I won!

Mr McCallum said "Now you guys have to race again,"So all the first and second people wentdown to the start again we got split in half I was in the fist race I was really nervous now. Fiona said "ready set go," and banged the clappers.

Yay I won the hole sprints I bet all the 9 year old girls! yes!!!!

Lc 13

I love LC 13 .Tc is the best teacher ever.I love doing the cross country and duathlon and it feels so good wining both of them.Quiddige is so fun because you get to own your own business.The production was so cool our dance was the best and doing dance explorers is so fun with wonderful Mrs walker.Camp was awesome we did so many things.Te Puawai is the best thing.I WISH THIS YEAR NEVER ENDS!!!!!!!!!!.

speach video

speach assessment

Speeches

Written and Oral Language

We are learning to:

Present material, conveying meaning clearly and accurately

Write and speak, expressing personal viewpoints, sequencing ideas logically

Speech Topic:

oylimpics		Self Assessment from video	Speech in front of class
Success Criteria:
Speech Writing
My speech followed the hamburger technique and was logically sequenced		yes	yes
The point I was making was easy to understand		yes	yes
My speech contained research		yes	yes
My speech had voice and was interesting		yes	no
My speech was in my words		yes	yes
My big idea comes through strongly		yes	yes
Presentation
I enunciated my words clearly		no	no
Terminal consonants
Ts and ds in the middles of words
Swallowed my goobies first
Seperated my words
My voice was loud enough		no	no
I learnt my speech off by heart		yes	yes
I used expression in my voice		no	no
I used enough volume to be heard by all		no	no
I used eye-contact		yes	yes
My speech was not too fast, not too slow		no	no
My speech was between 2 and 3 minutes		yes	no
My presentation materials supported but didn’t repeat my words		­_	_
Total:		9	7

Novice – 5 Apprentice – 6 Practitioner – 11 Expert – 14

Self Assessment after Video

Self Assessment after Speech